Monday 31 October 2016

Precise Vocabulary - NARRATIVE READING


WALT: Identify Precise Vocabulary About The Book We Were Reading.
Here are some precis vocabulary about the book I was reading before I scammed through the book to find it. The book I was reading was about a tsunami going through samoa.
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Birthday Invitation


WALT: Send a invitation to one our buddies friend.
The invitation is supposed to look cool and have a lot of information about what is going to happen, where and when it will be.
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Diwali - Celebrations


WALT: ANswer Some Questions About Diwali.
Today me and my buddy Ana managed to answer questions about Diwali.
My buddy pretty much done all the answers because that's what they were supposed to do, I had to ask her the questions and she answered them.
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The Show!

This Is My Story About An Obstacle Course Called The Show!
,One Day I woke up in terror, cold wind smashing my face like stones. I didn’t know where I was, It looked like jail, I watch the wall as the big structure rises into the sky with a crane hooked up into it. A voice says “Get Up Willie,” In a dark voice, So I done as he said, he got up stretching. The man spoke again and said “Welcome to our new T.V called GET SOME Hello my name is Siale and you are the first person to be on this show,”


I looked around confused and said “Sorry Sir but you must have the wrong person I never agreed to come on this show,” Then Siale said “Yes you didn’t we did,” Then a man approached me and said “We have been watching you and from all the exercise and energy we thought you might be the perfect starter for our show,” I asked the man Politely “What do I have to do? The man said “We will mention it when the show starts so let's get you suited up.”


While they were walking to the dressing rooms I had a little peek around he saw the trees move as if they were alive, then a tree stalked him as he walked pass. I entered the dressing rooms there were all different kinds I found one that I like it had black and yellow stripes my FAVOURITE COLOURS! When I walked out, T.V cameras were staring at me like zombies I walked over to the start line and looked up I saw birds around watching me as if I was their prey.


Siale said “Here are the rules You have to complete this ninja course if you do then their will be one last course which i like to call THE DEVIL RIDE of course named by me.” I looked at man and said “What do I get if I finish both courses?” Siale replied “You will win 1 million dollars and if you think the first course is easy then wait for The Devil Ride it was designed the world's most creative man in the world, he has made sure that this ride will knock your socks off.” I saw cheeky chipmunks chewing on nuts I felt hungry while I was watching them
I was just about to ask another question Until SIale Said with excitement “3 2 1 GO! I took one step and already I could feel sweat dangling from my head from all strangeness that was going on so I went with it. The first obstacle was running on ladders if you fell over you would fail but you wouldn’t hit the ground there was a net at the bottom of the whole course, while I was running on the ladder it cried as I kept on stepping on it after that I advanced to the next obstacle there were 4 more to go.


I felt like I was glued to a running machine I was making good progress I just needed to believe in myself. As I was running I seen the obstacle I tried but I was moving as fast as light, I saw two sharks that I had jump I could hear their teeth clashing together making a noise CHING CHING. I thought that if I put two my two on top and the bottom of the shark's mouth it won’t swallow me so I ran jumped as soon as the shark bounced out but it the way it jumped looked like it just got bailed out of jail I spread my legs with hesitation and did I quickly hurried before the shark closed it’s mouth I jumped to the other side like I was spring, While I was flying in the air I felt like a Sea Eagle with a beating heart going faster every time i thought of it.


When I made it across I felt like a champ who has accomplished the impossible until I saw that I had more to do, when I did see the rest my face dropped like their was a train that weighed 1 ton on my lip. I stopped to take a deep breathe as if it was my last, I didn’t just try the whole thing for money, I did because I have been getting let down from they keep telling, your not good enough, don’t even try, you SUCK and today I am going to use those words to finish my race to make them look likes fools, to let them that they are wrong I can do anything I want to and If I am going then I will.


Siale “Quickly said off yeah and if you don’t finish this race in 5 more minutes oh yeah I forgot to mention there is a time sorry anyways back to what I was talking about, so if you don’t win under the time limit your house will be knocked down your family will leave you and your bank money will go to other people.” I quickly thought to myself okay let's do this I quickly rush finding myself running faster than I have ran before now I am in it to win it now or you can say bail, stay of trial and fail.

I get ready for the next obstacle It looks like a spiral what had to is make it through without falling because I have time on my back l run and start to do a grapevine. A is where your arms are spread out and you are moving one leg over the other then taking and doing it again I thought it would be the perfect strategy, but their was a little twist the spinning circle stopped and started spinning the other way and then the other and that’s what it did the whole time so I made a jump for it. I made it I was relieved that their was only one more to go but I was still tired and this obstacle looked the hardest.


Clashing colourful chipping big teeth were up first, all I had to do was run or jump through but the problem is that this thing was moving 500km PH! How can anyone make. I had to use patience to pass part of the obstacle. Siale yells “You have 1 min & 30 seconds. I waited until the teeth hit each other and made a run for it it was rather better than getting squashed. I had just finished it off with a little speed but the teeth caught my suit I was getting tossed backwards and forwards like toy. So I had to do the most embarrassing thing on national T.V. Tiny tight tan looking undies but if I had then I would.


I see the last obstacle for 2 hours and I would say that the difficulty of this one would be really impossible. Ten big bulky balls swing backwards and forwards. I get on my stomach and roll down that was the key to winning this. After that I seen a dark tunnel I enter this tunnel, Deep into the darkness, I stood there wondering, fearing, Doubting dreaming dreams no bean has ever dared to dream before. Now I’m tippy toeing like a ballerina try to avoid things I might not want to encounter I see light I think in mind that this is the end I have done this I am going to prove everyone wrong am about to achieve the impossible.


I finished the whole and completed the next obstacle, it was the hardest ever but I done when I went home everybody was hugging me and happy. I bought a new house and a new car, I also could afford to give my family members some money for their lives. They called me the saviour of the family and I was never doubted again!


What Traditions Are Associated With Celebrations And Why Do They Continue?


WALT: Answer Questions
Today I was finishing some work and I found a presentation that was unfinished so I decided to finish it and it had a couple questions on it and this is one of them What Traditions Are Associated With Celebrations ANd WHy Do They Continue?
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Celebrating Me!


WALT: Answer questions that were giving to us on a presentation.
Today I was answering questions given to me , I think I answered them pretty well because gave good for the questions and thought really hard on this piece of work.
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Christmas - Researching Skills


WALT: Research some questions about Christmas.
Today I was finishing off a presentation about Christmas. My teacher gave us some questions to research about our celebration and we were doing CHRISTMASS!. Christmas is celebrated all over the globe by getting gifts or by having a family get together. My family celebrates christmas by giving out gifts and getting new stuff.
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Basketball Reflection

Today I went to KiwiSport, with 6 of my classmates. We were practicing basketball a sport that is played all over the world. Our teacher taught us a move for when you are at the 3 pointer, the first position is to guard the ball. We also learnt what the signals are for travel and double dribble. I think I done well in KiwiSport because when we had a game I was the only person who scored. He also taught us how to do a proper layup. What do need to work on next time? I think I need to work on trying to get all my moves right

Tuesday 25 October 2016

Reflection - Books SSR

Today I was reading a story about the Digestive System. The book was mostly talking about healthy that you can eat it showed some steps of how to make a nice healthy snack which I am still reading. The book showed the insides of a dogs body too, the book also had information about how the food goes down and where it comes out. This book I was reading said that we have reasons of why we burp and fart and it says where they come from. My favourite part of the book is where it has info about food, I like that part because I really like food.

What Makes Tamaki Primary Special


WALT: To Brainstorm How We Think WHat Makes Our School Special
Today I was brainstorming and planning on a topic our whole class had to do it in groups of four. I came up some Ideas that I think is right.
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How Can We Make Tamaki A Better Place?


WALT: Brain Storm How To Make Our School A Better Place
Today I created a brainstorm full of ideas about how I can make the school a better place.
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Tuesday 18 October 2016

KiwiCan - Reflection

Hi, Today we went Kiwi Can, they are their to teach us the importance of life and to make sure we know how to keep ourselves. Today we played a game called noodle soccer it's where you have to get a 2 pool noodles a friends and a soccer ball you have to whack the ball with the noodle and try to score the goal just like soccer. After that one of noodles broke in half so we had to play hand soccer it's where you use your hands to call and the ref or person who watching has to call a number and if that number is you then you run to the ball and use your hands to score, you will know your number because you get lined up and you get number from 1 to how many people is in your team. After that we talked about respect and responsibilities we had to write down what responsibilities we have within our school. After that we made up a chant for when we leave KiwiCan it was fun!

Monday 17 October 2016

Basketball - Reflection



Today we had kiwisport, for kiwisport we were playing basketball, we were practicing our dribbling skills and we also practiced our shooting. After we had to vs the girls in a shooting competition and we won I got the most points with 7 it was first 15. I think I done well in my shooting and my dribbling because I listened and absorbed what I knew about basketball and used it in what we were doing.

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Friday 14 October 2016

Person Goals For Term 4

WALT: Set goals for term 4.
TOday I set me some goals for this term at school, I have chosen some powerful goals for my life and school, One of them are to stay fit for a healthy body so I can move around and stay healthy. My other goal was to set a growth mindset towards learning, school and life I chose that goal because I have been making some bad choices which have lead me to almost my student council badge so I have to change.
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1 Minute Speech - Reflection


From Tuesday 11 October we started to do 1 minute speeches. We had to choose a topic from a box then we have 5 minutes to brainstorm what we know about the topic we have got. Then we have 1 minute to say what we have written or we can just memorize what we have wrote some people just say what they know on the spot. From my opinion I think I done well because i was using hand gestures and my body language. I think some things I need to work on are saying less umms and more information because I always get topics which I don’t but I still try and see what I know.

Celebration Brainstorm


WALT: To write a brain about what celebration mean to us. Here is a link for another celebration reflection on celebrations
Today I created a brainstorm on the things that I know of that can be celebrated and I added some Images to show what I mean for you to understand.
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Book Reflection

Hi! Today I read a book about the creating of the movies. It had all the information you need to know about how the movies was and who contributed to making it. First it showed up the silent movies era they are movies without sound which made them more entertaining for the people back in the days. Then it gave me information about the first movie theatre that was made it had a board with a list of movies on it, it looked the the saem board from at the bus stop with all of the places you can and when they will arrive. And then it had the upper class movie theatres it also had a drawing of what Ian Swan the designer of the movie theatre in Queensland wanted it to look like and he accomplished it. Their are so much information on the chairs and steps. The last chapter was about the drive in movies where you could sit on the ground  with your pets and watch a movie.

Tuesday 11 October 2016

Poem - Rotorua


WALT: Write a poem about the best thing we done on the holidays
Today I made a poem about the best I did on the holidays it was going to Rotorua
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