Explanation Brainstorm

WALT: Brainstorm our explanation for our writing.
Hi, Today I was doing a brainstorming task based on writing, We had to choose a rapper, singer or author to talk about. We have to pursue our audience to listen to this person or read the books that this person has wrote. One thing I got out of this activity was improving my persuading skills, I think they have improved I wish to try to persuade you's in the future.
To help my writing learning become a better set of thinking can you leave a comment about some things that may help me, or some feedback and feedforward THANK YOU ;)

Experianced Poem

WALT: Write a poem about an experienced poem
Today I wrote a poem about an experienced celebration that I have experienced in my life and that was a birthday.
To help my poetic skills improve PLEASE leave a comment or some feedback and feedforward BYE!

Word Features

Why Games Are Important

Why games are important:

There are many types of games. We can learn lots of things from all of them.

Games are different. We can play online, physical games, thinking games, competitive games and games just for fun. There are many types of games. We can learn lots of things from all of them.

Games are different. We can play online, physical games, thinking games, competitive games and games just for fun. You can learn how to become a good rugby player by playing rugby games and analyse how other players run, how they step and tackle to improve in your rugby. Other people will be able to trust you if you're able to handle the pain because you might be playing an over aged game but the more you play over aged games, you can learn to persevere, never give up and tackle bigger people by ourselves. So it’s pretty good if you play games against people who are bigger or older than you. .(Like rugby)If there were no games at school when people are doing there work it would be a bit good because with no games people would have nothing to concentrate on work. People would be really bored without games because there is nothing to do but watch T.v and talk with your friends. Everyone that plays games now will be extra bored because they have nothing to do. Without games you would just be reading books or doing homework, which is no fun at all.  If games weren't invented( Ps3, Xbox and sports) I will probably just learn how to live life without games and programs on T.v and sit in bed talk with my brothers or play on the piano. Games are important because everyone needs to have fun in their life, not just sit around doing nothing watching movies or making food and not learning new skills and new things in life.

That’s why I will feel games are important.

WALT:Use the S.E.E structure to edit our work.

Today I was doing a writing of Why Games Are Important while using the S.E.E structure to edit my work also I was using the Tamaki Primary School Rubric.

To Help me improve in my writing PLEASE leave a comment or some feedback and feedforward THANKYOU :)

How to get on the king pig list

How to get on the king pig list.

      Have you ever tried your hardest. To get on the king pig list. So you can stay inside and play on your netbook. Well all you're trying hard can become harder.

First wait until you see the teacher searching for someone to go on the king pig list. If someone is talking to you. Move straight away. She or he will see you doing the right thing.

           Next when you're in a sensible place. Make sure you’re head is facing your own netbook so you don’t get into trouble. If you’re looking at your own netbook then your teacher will spot you easily.

Then if she doesn't spot you. Well don’t worry you still got other options to make.

After that another thing to do is get your work finished on time. Make sure that you are doing the right thing even when no one is looking. If you need help with your work. Don’t scream out to the teacher asking her for help just walk up to the teacher and tell her or him what you need help with.

Another Idea to get your name on the king pig list is to show respect to all teachers, students and visitors. For example open the door for visitors and teachers be a gentleman. Another way to respect the younger ones is to show them the right to do. Because if you do the wrong thing the younger ones will copy you.

After that if the teacher writes another persons name  on the board. And everyone else moans, don’t moan. The might teacher spot and write your name on the king pig list too.

If your teacher says “Daimai what are you on” If you are on your work be more accountable and say you’re on your work and show him or her your screen. She might put your name on the king pig list.

Finally you have your name on the king pig list for going through all of that hard work you have done.

Next time you and you’re trying to get your names on the king pig list.  Show your friend how to do it or share the work with them.

Thankyou for looking at my work!